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| StyleWriter's
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most powerful way to edit any document |
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Call
StyleWriter up by clicking a button in your word
processor's toolbar.
StyleWriter displays all your editing problems at
the same time. As you begin editing, StyleWriter
offers intelligent alternatives and sound advice
to help you edit your document into simple, concise,
plain English. With a split screen of StyleWriter
and your word processor, you can go through your
document at your own pace. You can click on any
style or usage problem with your mouse, or click
back to your word processor to edit your text.
StyleWriter
edits any document. Articles, press releases, resumes
and cover letters, technical manuals, speeches,
ads, sales letters, proposals, legal documents,
corporate communications - you name it, StyleWriter
can help edit it. Within seconds of launching, StyleWriter
has analyzed your documents for thousands of style
and English usage issues including:
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Complex
words
Overused words
Jargon/Abstract words
Wordy phrases
Passive verbs
Foreign words
Qualifying words
Confused hyphens
Clichés
Legal words
Long Sentences
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Misused
Words
Confused Words
Hyphenation
Sexist Writing
Common Grammar Slips
Miscellaneous
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Without
StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have now completed
the majority of
our redrafting work conducted
on an annual basis
for your management
brochure however a
number of
issues still
remain
to be addressed
before it can
be sent for
printing.
I
have been asked
to follow-up
on a number of questions that need to
be answered
by yourself
or your head of public affairs.
I
would be grateful if
you could give this matter your urgent
attention. Should you have any
questions concerning
the information required,
please do not hesitate to contact
me.
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StyleWriter
Dear
Mr Thompson:
We
have completed most of this year's redrafting
work on your corporate management brochure.
However, you need to address some issues
before we print the brochure.
I need to follow up these questions
with you or your head of public affairs.
Please
look at these issues urgently and contact
me if you need more information.
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93
StyleWriter
suggested improvements 17:
6 wordy phrases
· 2 complex words
· 3 business clichés
· 5 passive verbs
· 1 long sentence
· 1 grammar error (by yourself)
1 hyphenation error (follow-up)
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60
The
StyleWriter recommended redraft is 60
words - 33 percent shorter.

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Full-screen
editing plus your word processor
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StyleWriter's
displays all of its editing advice at once.
You can expand the screen to show a page of your
document, with each problem or issue highlighted.
The top of the screen shows you how to edit your
document into concise, clear English. You can make
most changes by just clicking the blue alternative
shown. If you want to make more extensive changes
- and you will - just click StyleWriter's Edit button
and you're in your familiar word processor with
all its advanced editing features.

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| Instant
analysis and ratings of every document |
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StyleWriter's
gives you instant, relevant analysis and scores.
Most other writing aids offer you simplistic readability
formulas. These measure, often inaccurately, your
sentence length and a syllable count to define long
words. There's more to good writing than sentence
length and word length.
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StyleWriter
has three key scores and ratings shown at the bottom
of the program's screen.
1.
The
Style Index - an overall score of the clarity
of your style.
2.
The
Average Sentence Length - an important readability
measure.
3.
The
Passive Index - a measure of the most common
writing problem.
Each score and rating becomes instantly updated
as you edit your document.
When
you edit with StyleWriter, you'll discover that
StyleWriter shortens sentences and strengthens words.
Readers can easily take in and remember your message
and as they find your writing style easy and understandable.

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| Fine-tuning
the analysis to your document |
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You
can adapt StyleWriter's analysis and ratings to
the type of document you're drafting.
An advertisement needs to have a punchy, direct
writing style; a manual needs to be clear and simple;
a report can carry more complex ideas. So you can
tell StyleWriter the type of document you're drafting
and it will alter its analysis and ratings to reflect
the different styles expected. For example, you'll
get a higher Style Index and stricter ratings if
you tell StyleWriter you're writing an advertisement
rather than a report.
Choose
from 12 writing tasks to fine-tune StyleWriter's
analysis.

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| See
an instant graph of sentence variety |
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StyleWriter
gives you an instant graph of your sentence variety
so you can see if you're mixing long and short sentences
to add interest to your style. While
short sentences make easy reading, good writing
contains good sentence variety and a readable average
sentence length between 15 to 20 words. The program
will even pop-up a warning if your sentence average
drops below 12 words - a sign you're taking the
idea of short sentences too far.

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Use
sentence variety to add interest to your writing
style.
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| See
a breakdown of your writing problems |
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Identify
your writing habits in every document. The
left-hand side of StyleWriter's Category Summary
Screen shows the style problems in document
you're checking. You'll find this a great way to
know if your style is passive and wordy, abstract
or stale.

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Use
StyleWriter's summary of writing issues to identify
your writing habits.
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| Add
advice to StyleWriter |
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You
can add advice to StyleWriter to increase the power
and accuracy of the program. The more
you use StyleWriter the more your writing and editing
skills improve. Learning the main techniques of
good editors makes you think like an editor and
you'll soon spot other ways to improve your writing.
For example, suppose you notice you are overusing
the words 'provide', 'involve' and
'undertake', you simply add them to the program
and ask the program to pop up some relevant advice.
It's as easy as using search and replace on your
word processor. But StyleWriter searches for everything
you add and its 35,000 style and usage patterns
check every time you run the program.
Add
any editing advice to StyleWriter

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| Delete
any advice that annoys you |
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Deleting
advice from the program is easy.
Anything that annoys you - perhaps because it has
a different industry-specific meaning - you can
easily remove.
Fine-tune
StyleWriter's advice to suit your writing needs.

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| Make
context-sensitive exceptions |
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You
can make context-sensitive changes to StyleWriter's
advice to fine-tune it to your own writing needs.
For example, StyleWriter suggests replacing 'purchasing'
with 'buying' to simplify your style. But
what if your job title is 'Purchasing Manager'?.
You can make 'purchasing manager' an exception.
Then every time StyleWriter checks a document it
highlights all occurrences of 'purchasing'
unless the next word is 'manager'.
Fine-tuning
StyleWriter's advice is easy.

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| Review
the changes made to the program |
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StyleWriter
records any changes you make to the program so you
can review and even reverse them. Most
users delete or make exceptions to between 10 and
50 of StyleWriter's 35,000 patterns. StyleWriter's
Review Changed Patterns feature lets you
view every change you've made.
Review
your changes to StyleWriter's database.

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| Bring
StyleWriter's power to your documents |
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StyleWriter
looks for patterns in language and uses wild cards
to find thousands of variants of problems in writing.
This gives the program immense searching power.
StyleWriter has 35,000 style and English usage checks
designed to reflect patterns in the English language.
For example:
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StyleWriter |
| Mr
Jones has reached his
decision and will take
his retirement option next year. |
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StyleWriter |
| Mr
James has decided
to retire
next year. |
Editors
recognise 'reached his decision' and 'take
retirement' as hidden verb - expressions
you can turn from nouns to verbs to improve style,
add action and save words. Because StyleWriter uses
wild cards within its pattern searches, it doesn't
matter if you write 'reached his decision',
'reaching different decisions' or 'reached
my decision'. StyleWriter finds each variant
hidden verb and thousands of other possible hidden
verbs with just a few coded patterns.
StyleWriter,
by using wild cards to match with patterns editors
spot in text, is the world's most powerful writing
aid.
Bring
the power of StyleWriter to your writing.
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| Use
StyleWriter for different writing tasks |
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You
can call up StyleWriter's extensive help screens
for different writing tasks. Perhaps you have to
write a sales letter for the first time.
Simply click on StyleWriter's Writing Tips
and you'll find expert advice. You can also call
up this advice from your word processor's help menu
so it's available when you first draft your document.

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StyleWriter
helps you tackle different writing tasks.
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| Use
StyleWriter's help screens for more editing advice |
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If
you want more advice, just click your mouse on the
problem and up pops the relevant help screen with
more editing advice.
For
example, if you've used a grammar checker you'll
notice it stops on passive verbs. But you probably
don't understand why using passive verbs are a problem
or what to do with them. StyleWriter, with its accurate
and comprehensive search for passive verbs, explains
why passive verbs are such a problem and shows you
simple techniques to switch them to the shorter,
more direct active style.

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Look
at this government example. Changing the passive
verbs (shown in red) into active verbs (shown in
blue) saves 18 per cent of the words.
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It
was estimated
by the research that half of the states would
adopt the approach, and that savings of up to
$900 million a year would be
made. However, to make sure these
savings are guaranteed
estimates will need to be
recalculated by the Department of
Labor for accuracy.
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StyleWriter |
The
research estimated
half of the states would adopt
this approach and could save
up to $900 million a year. The Department of
Labor will need
to recalculate
this estimate to guarantee
these savings are accurate.
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Switching
passive verbs to active verbs is easy with StyleWriter's
expert editing advice.
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| Keep
track of your improved writing skills |
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StyleWriter's
Statistical Archive lets you record the word count,
style index, average sentence length and passive
index of every document.
StyleWriter records your scores when it first checks
the document (the original draft score) and when
you finished editing (the redraft score). The Statistical
Archive lets you measure the improvement you make
to each document. By looking at the original draft
score, you can see how your general writing standard
improves.

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StyleWriter
keeps a record of the writing scores
for every document checked.
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"StyleWriter
is like a crash course in professional editing. It will
not leave one's writing unchanged."
- Computers and the Law |
"Looking
back at the way I used to write press releases I now
understand why
editors didn't bother to publish them. StyleWriter shows
me how to write in the style newspaper and magazine
editors prefer. The result is more free
exposure in the media."
- Chief Executive Officer |
"If
its a style checker you're after we'd plump for StyleWriter.
The rules are simple to understand and it's a it's a
doddle to use."
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What Personal Computer |
"Using
StyleWriter is a real
eye-opener. It gives instant analysis and ratings for
style, sentence length and passive verbs. My style was
consistently rated poor until I started to follow the
program's advice. Now my writing is consistently good
and occasionally the program rates it as excellent."
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Accountant |
"As
I edit, StyleWriter's analysis and ratings of my document
change. There's no better encouragement to edit your
draft than seeing the improvement in your own scores.
I now constantly strive for three excellent ratings."
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University Lecturer |
"I
ran StyleWriter through my technical report. The redraft
was 30 percent shorter, simpler and easier to read and
understand. I'll use StyleWriter on every document now."
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Technical Author |
"StyleWriter
really helped me during my Masters degree with an 81
percent average. I am sure part of that is due to StyleWriter
making my writing more readable and succinct."
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Student |
"StyleWriter's
the best thing since sliced sandwiches!"
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Journalist
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"I
work as a senior marketing manager at a Fortune 500
company. StyleWriter showed us we're not very good -
no we're dreadful - at communicating with our customers.
Since using StyleWriter, I've gained the skill of writing
clearly. It's like shining a searchlight through a sea
of corporate fog."
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Marketing Executive |
"For
me the best feature is adding to the program. I have
dozens of preferred spellings, alternatives to industry
jargon and words I want to avoid. Adding my advice to
the program means I can check for all my editing issues
in seconds."
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Newsletter Editor |
"You
could, for example, add technical words or words used
in your profession. I could imagine the editor of a
computer magazine adding the word 'baud' to remind writers
it is often misused for 'bits per second.'"
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Freelance Journalist |
"Every
lawyer should use this software. I should know - I've
been practising law for 30 years."
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Lawyer |
"In
an ideal world, every technical writer would have a
copy of StyleWriter."
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The Manual |
"StyleWriter
constantly surprises me. Just when I think I've produced
the clearest possible draft, it comes along and points
out a few more ways to improve my style or picks out
a hyphenation or word choice error."
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Subeditor |
"There's
more good advice in StyleWriter's help screens than
on any $200 business writing course. The screens summarize
the key points of the best writing techniques and give
me the confidence to tackle any writing task."
- Training Officer |
"Once
I followed StyleWriter's advice and switched passive
verbs into active verbs, my writing became shorter,
clearer and less ambiguous. StyleWriter's advice on
passive verbs alone is worth the price of the program."
- Government Administrator |
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"I'm
from the Wall Street Journal and I need a copy of
StyleWriter."
"Do
you want to review the package?"
"No.
I need it for everything I write."
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Press Journalist
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